Where is The Conclusion???

Wow, this week is amazing because we had three meetings in a week. 2 meetings are as usual, and a meeting is as replacement from the previous week. The first meeting is on Monday. It’s held a workshop by discussing cause and effect paragraph. In that workshop I review Lalang’s paragraph. According to me Lalang’s paragraph is good, because it has clear and simple topic sentence. It has 1 effect and 4 causes, so the cause is more dominant than the effect. It also explains every cause in detail. But, unfortunately it doesn’t have concluding sentence.

Going on to the next meeting, it’s on Wednesday. The agenda is presentation. Exactly this presentation is the last presentation. There are 3 presenters, including me for this week. The first is Trias. She presented about explanation paragraph that we thought it’s a persuasive paragraph. What I’ve learned from Trias’s paragraph is that persuasive paragraph has to have something persuaded whereas trias’s paragraph doesn’t have it. It just tells the important of homework without persuading someone to do homework. Then, the 2^nd presenter was me. My paragraph isn’t debatable, because the topic, topic sentence, and the type is clear. But, the form isn’t as a paragraph. So, I have to modify it. The fault is on the placement. Before I modify, the paragraph has many subjects because every sentence is separated by a point. After that, I combine them all into a paragraph. And, it becomes a perfect paragraph. The last presenter is Zakiah. She has a more paragraph than mine. So, nothing has to be debated.

The last meeting for this week is on Friday. The agenda was workshop under the theme “classification”. I held Zakiah’s paragraph. She wrote the classification of rinso liquid. The deficiency is same as Lalang’s paragraph. It doesn’t have concluding sentence.